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Next stop twelve

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1 Next stop twelve on Mon Dec 19, 2011 1:22 pm

next stop is the hour of twelve
the man's* words in the song come to me
I am I said to no one there not even the chair
I've got this emptiness deep inside
no matter how I tried it wont let me go
but I know why
standing eyes closed
my head against the cold tiles
I know why
this emptiness has a name
carved into my heart of stone
and no matter how hard I try
it wont let me go
cold water down my body
summer heat dancing down stream lets
of tiredness,
the hour rattles along on it's tracks
next stop twelve
as I sit, wet naked
smoking another cigarette
the song plays out in my head
notes die down
thoughts of you,..
never will
I've got this emptiness deep inside
and it wont let me go
this emptiness has your face
the words of the song your voice
no matter how I've tried
it wont let me go
there's no one there
not even a chair
to hear my cry
the hour of twelve
next stop with no rest

* neil daimond- I am I said

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2 Re: Next stop twelve on Thu Dec 22, 2011 4:37 am

his words come to you ... deeply moving poem to me .

Where you sit wet naked , where you've got emptiness inside you , where you cry ...
may my commitment to you console you !

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3 Re: Next stop twelve on Thu Dec 22, 2011 11:16 pm

your commitment as always makes me stand proud!

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4 Re: Next stop twelve on Thu Jan 19, 2012 9:19 am

I light another cigarette and wait for the next words

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