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Sadness

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1 Sadness on Tue Dec 06, 2011 1:16 am

Sadness...

has taken proper hold of me


sifted me like desert sand


our love was never meant to be


your touch lingers on my hand


where you last held on a while


never really wanting to let go


seeing that ever loving smile


turning away from me real slow





sadness shrivelled up my heart


smothering love that was there


now that we really are apart


realising life is actually unfair


your kisses filled with passion


arms longing for your embrace


has love become old fashioned


that soon there will be no trace.


2011/10/12 Joan Lotz

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2 Re: Sadness on Tue Dec 06, 2011 12:02 pm

this is written very very well and the sadness can be felt in the perfect wording

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3 Re: Sadness on Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:26 am

Thank you, Ronel...I appreciate your comment!

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4 Re: Sadness on Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:18 pm

Pragtig, Joan!

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