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My own closure, yours no longer required.

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1 My own closure, yours no longer required. on Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:27 pm





After
that , the pain, turmoil, dis-trust and disappointment, I banished
myself to the valley of desolation and solitude, believing it to be
safer there.

Standing on the edge I looked down in to the pit of darkness and insanity, for a minute I considered it.

You came along, tempted me with the prospects of happy ever afters, tempted me through my lustful weakness.

Although not pure in my actions, I did you no harm, you were too
busy doing a good job all by yourself, and then, by means of non-closure
and suddenty, you managed to shun and kick me way past the edge.

I fell long, hard and painfully. So hard it still hurts. That was
only the beginning. The pit was one step away from the eternity meant
for those that God does not recognize, so close I might just as well
have shared hades with the fallen churebs of the time before the
Beginning. I saw images and experienced things not meant for living
mortals. These images will forever haunt me. As time goes by, it will be
less, but 30 years from now... I will still have those dreams, still
see subtle reminders... and still will not be able to share.

But never again, never ever again.

I have crawled out of that pit, I made it to the valley of
desolation, and I am now navigating my way back to the plain of
possibilities.


I will never give up, not on life , not in love.

This spirit is too precious, life is too amazing... and love too beautiful.


I see the edge of the valley's forestry and the path that leads to the plain of possibilities.


And way, way beyond the plain, there I see the beautiful side of eternity...

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2 Re: My own closure, yours no longer required. on Sun Nov 20, 2011 4:20 pm

sela !

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3 Re: My own closure, yours no longer required. on Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:01 pm

this work like the first time I read it touches me in a core so deep it has no name only a subtle ebb in darkest of night

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