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What we thought Love might be

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1 What we thought Love might be on Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:05 pm

like a voice
with no decibels
I call for you late at night
over valley, clouds
a thousand places away
you come
wipe my cheeks
take me away in dreams
you know my pain
without ever telling you
you see my weakness
without ever prodding there
in dreams you abduct me
to so many years ago
once again
we are making love
under starry skies
sleeping in each others arms
just two young ones in love
how perfect we were
all that time
no harsh words
ever lay between us
no tears,
only sweet gentle love
dawn pushes in
the sweet boy that loved me so
moves back
to be replaced
by one
so broken, so hurt, so lost
just like me
not believing, or trusting
in what we thought
love might be

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2 Re: What we thought Love might be on Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:10 pm

Was wondering whether this second person whom you share your feelings with , was/is real , surreal , unreal or super-real ? For the emotional synergy which you discribe is certainly not within the bounds of normality . And then 'dawn' comes to bedevil you crafty reality .... Beautiful poem with lingering aftereffect on my feelings .

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3 Re: What we thought Love might be on Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:09 pm

he is real, surreal, unreal and super real, he is what no mortal man can ever be!

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4 Re: What we thought Love might be on Mon Nov 21, 2011 10:51 pm

Wow at a total loss for words.......

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5 Re: What we thought Love might be on Tue Nov 22, 2011 12:08 am

thank you very much Nicky,.. a core thought in verse I hope

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6 Re: What we thought Love might be on Tue Nov 22, 2011 2:41 am

Mmmm, by my binneste is geroer en gaan vir 'n geruime tyd nog rond beweeg as gevolg van die lieflikke stuk Ronel. Dankie, dis moes waarom 'n mens wil lees

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